For completeness' sake, this is the final draft. If you've read it before, don't bother; I'm only putting this up because I occasionally show this essay to people and I'd rather they read the final final draft =)

You know what this means )
This was actually turned in before the prior essay and I got 49 out of 50 points on it. The teacher had only a few minor editing points.

It's Never Too Late To start )
This one has some corrections, though it's essentially the same as the prior one. Only bother reading this one if you're interested in commenting on it with a critical eye.

I've also fixed the formatting so the paragraphs should be better separated.

I love this folding space bit... )
Since the due date on this got pushed back, naturally I put off writing it for a few days. It would've been more relevant on Sep 11, but who cares. I think these words are always relevant and something people should think about.

Oh, and this is just a rough draft, I haven't gone back and edit ted it at all yet.

Text folded into space to preserve the innocent... )

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