Again, comments appreciated. Critical and otherwise. Really!
One minor note to those who've already read Chapter 1; I changed the reference of Bellarius to Zhang Tsu because Bellarius sounds kinda lame.
( Cracks in the Window, chapter 2 )
One minor note to those who've already read Chapter 1; I changed the reference of Bellarius to Zhang Tsu because Bellarius sounds kinda lame.
( Cracks in the Window, chapter 2 )