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This one has some corrections, though it's essentially the same as the prior one. Only bother reading this one if you're interested in commenting on it with a critical eye.
I've also fixed the formatting so the paragraphs should be better separated.
( I love this folding space bit... )
I've also fixed the formatting so the paragraphs should be better separated.
( I love this folding space bit... )
Since the due date on this got pushed back, naturally I put off writing it for a few days. It would've been more relevant on Sep 11, but who cares. I think these words are always relevant and something people should think about.
Oh, and this is just a rough draft, I haven't gone back and edit ted it at all yet.
( Text folded into space to preserve the innocent... )
Oh, and this is just a rough draft, I haven't gone back and edit ted it at all yet.
( Text folded into space to preserve the innocent... )
